Certainly Love

Hey, I'm a Christian too. There's something we have in common. Keep up the good work, but try to stay in whatever tense you're in. It gets confusing.

I think I know how this writer feels...I think everyone, who has ever been in love, knows what it feels like. And I think that the feeling that I think ...

I liked this poem. Write more. I enjoyed this one as did my sister.

yes...a little bit of romance would be nice. Oh and I wrote another story. I didn't have a title so I just labeled it Romance. Anyway...keep up the good writing. ...

I actually understood this story. It was rather, nice. Good work...

deep. I was think a lot of girls have gone through the same incident. I hate that...well, I loved it. It's so awesome.

Actually that's really how it was supposed to be, it was just a minor error, but thanks for your concern.

I love that I get criticized. hehehe...

I have changed some things, hope you like it.

First of all, I didn't like the "Do you know a girl called Kate. It should have been, "Do you happen to have come across a girl, who goes by ...

It's the fourth Chapter...

PLease This, story needs attention!

Thank you all for the compliments!

OK...

Well, here's chapter one if you care to read it.